“Kanata船长”Captain Kanata(6) 已翻译

**官方发布的游戏剧情之六:

"Captain Kanata"
“Kanata船长”**

感谢10的112次方的精彩翻译

卡纳塔船长
在阿特玛上有着一个总被孩子们所神往的故事,这就是勇敢的卡纳塔船长以及他那带有传奇色彩的的惊险壮举---他曾在数十亿个行星上建立殖民地并摧毁过几百艘海盗船---当然,这只是孩子们的童话。不过它起源于一个在半人马座的人和他那小而真实的故事,它来自一个伟大船长的自述。

这就是那个自述…

一声爆炸的回响充斥在黑暗中。
“谁来救救我!”从远处传来一声惨叫。
我睁开眼,一股腥甜从我的前额上流下,有事情发生了。我从床上迷糊过来查看船舱四周。只过了片刻一切又都安静下来,黑暗重归静寂。

突然,船震动起来,此时船体就像在经历一场爆炸。我的舱门挣脱了固定甩进墙外走廊里透出的大火中,扇在外面的壁板上。我跳下床跑出卧舱,发现走廊在着火,我就开始跑下走廊,冲过路上的烈焰,拐了一个弯进入到控制舱里。
“指挥官,"中尉发现了我,“刚才在第四甲板层发生了爆炸,供热系统完蛋了!”
“有没有伤亡?”我问,一边试图驱逐因睡眠不足带来的困意。
“五百多人死亡,七十六人受伤-长官!”
“天啊…到底发生了什么事?”
“有东西在4甲板层的供热系统附近爆炸,这导致了从中央供热管路到船员宿舍的连锁爆炸。”
我把每件事情都考虑一会,这种事情现在是不会出现的,离地是那么近,太近了。
“向第三至第五区域发送安全警报,派人到第四区,还有…”
船舱上方的告警器这时响了起来。
“导弹来袭,导弹来袭,撞击准备。”
“长官,有人正在用一艘我们的战斗舰向第三和第四甲板层开火!”

恐怖袭击。

“好吧,让所有战机驾驶员立即向第二甲板层转移,我想这是胁迫性破坏!”

我正准备离开控制室时,又一次冲击波击中了船体。过了片刻,一股巨大的爆炸冲击席卷着火焰穿过门向我袭来。然后我失去了知觉。

我醒来时发现身处燃烧中,我感到自己快要着火了,我试着坐起来,但是有东西压在腰部,抬起头一看,一根粗大的铁管正横卧在我的肚子上面,而我周围全是熊熊的火焰,稠厚的浓烟在上方翻滚。我试着挪开那根铁管,但它太重了,我大吼着用上了吃奶的力气。这时,有什么东西掉下来砸到我的腿上,我用手立即摸到一股又暖又粘的液体,我把手举到面前,看到的是满手乌红的血。我想再次试着推开铁管,但剧烈的疼痛已使我丧失了最后的力量与信心…
“坎塔纳船长”
我疲缓的睁开眼睛,一张脸呈现在我的面前,这是一张男人的脸,他的深色头发从兜帽中垂露出来,那可怕的蓝眼仿佛要刺穿我。
“伟大的坎塔纳船长!”他用冰冷的语气嘲弄道“噢…,我多么期待此时此刻啊,我多么渴望能看到你咽气的---那最后一刻!”
我顿时感到天旋地转,喉头梗塞,我要喘不上气来了。
“你…你要干什么…”我开始问,但紧接着这让我明白了,“是你,是你安的炸弹是不是?”
“哦,是的,是的!可惜现在太晚了,所有那些可怜而无辜的人,他们信任你,他们相信你能保护他们,但是他们现在全死了… .”在我渴望呼吸时他开始大笑。
“为…为什么?”我急了,血开始涌上喉头。
“我的生命全耗费在这艘船上!我已经在这堆金属中生活了十年!它使我感到厌倦!这些年来我渴求来死亡的来临,最终我正好会让另一些人来此,另一些人会住进这堆一无是处的废金属里,只是用不了多长时间,我就会是众人中的另外一个。哦,不。我会记住,记住那个‘摧毁了这艘船的人’,我会成为大英雄!”
我的腿很糟糕,血这时流的更快了,看来是不会停了。当我感到臀部蹭到一个硬物时我沿着腿摸过去,我的枪!我把它从枪套中拔出。
“看看你周围!没有别人在这里,每个人都有他们的家庭和朋友,每个人都在试图灭火、修船、让船靠到行星附近,没人会恰好中了你的诡计,你只是会成为另一个被载入档案中的恐怖份子。”
“不…不!”他鼓起眼睛失声大叫,唾沫喷了我一脸。他蹲下抓住我的脖子开始想勒死我,我便举起枪开火,一道明亮的蓝光映亮了整个船舱。这个家伙满脸吃惊的看着我,然后一下倒在我旁边的地上,他的躯体浸在血泊中,死了。
我的视线又一次开始模糊了,天旋地转。我对自己说,至少你制止了他,至少你拯救了其他人。黑暗慢慢的将我吞没。

光芒照亮了前方,一种飞的感觉,两个身影在我的注视下被光芒吞没,没有能看清楚的东西,万物皆静…

我的视野脱离了模糊,大脑开始感知到外界的声音,我醒了。两名医务员一边俯视着我一边把我推进医疗室。
“把氧气罩归位吧,他的情况正在好转”一个人说。
当一个黑色的面罩从我脸上拿下时,我的眼睛又倦怠下来,黑暗再次来到。
当我醒来时发现自己正躺在一张面对着窗户的斜床上,在窗外,一颗巨大的行星像钻石一样镶嵌在黝黑的太空中。
“你醒了”我的旁边有个声音在说。
我转过头来看到中尉在对着我微笑。
“你感觉如何?”他问我。
“疲劳…我现在是什么状况?”我疑惑的问。
“我们…他们…对不起指挥官,医疗组什么也做不了,你失血过多而且内出血,并且舰上所有能修复这种损伤的医疗器材要么是坏了要么是毁了。”沉默了片刻,
“对不起”他补充道。

我对此又能指责什么呢…

“在我们面前的那个是什么行星?”过了一会我问。
“它是行星长官,名字是阿特玛。我们到了,我们将在下一个小时登陆长官。”

我们到了…我笑了,我做到了,我把我们带到了这里。我的视野开始变的模糊,疲倦开始袭来,但这次不同,我要死了。
“长官…长官!求你不要在这里挂掉!”

我当然不想,可我办不到,我太累了。
中尉凝视了我一会。
“你想怎么命名这个殖民星长官?”
我想了一会。
“就用家乡的名字吧。”
“非常好长官,我们会照办的。”
他鞠了一躬,然后开始转身走出房间。
“中尉!”我在后面叫他,“最后一件事…”
“什么事长官?”
“有个家伙今天要杀了我,他有精神病,但是他使我认识到一些东西,我想记下来…把你的录音器给我。”

坎塔纳船长于宇宙历7804年抵达阿特玛

以下是原文:

Captain Kanata
There are stories told on Atma, to young children, of the brave Captain Kantana, and his
dangerous exploits. They say he colonised billions of planets, and destroyed hundreds of
pirates. None are true. However, they originate from the one small, true story that has been
since before The Centaurus even existed as a people. It came from a single recording made
by the great captain himself.
This is that recording…
An explosion rings out amongst the darkness.
“Some one help!” a voice screams out in the distance.
My eyes open. Cold sweat trickles down my forehead. Something’s happening . I sit up in my
bed , and look around my cabin . For a moment everythng is silent , and the darkness is
untouched .
Boom. The ship shakes , as shockwaves blast through its hull. My cabin door breaks free
from its hinges and is launched into the wall revealing flames at the doorway , licking at the
frame . I jump out of bed and run out of my cabin . The hallway is on fire. I start to run down
the corridor , leaping over patches of bright flames , and turn a corner into the control room.
“Commander, ” the lieutenant addresses me , “There 's been an explosion on deck 4. The
heating systems have been completely destroyed!”
“Any casualties?” I ask , trying to regain my senses from the lack of sleep .
“Five hundred dead so far, and seventy six wounded sir!”
“My god… .what happened ?”
“Something exploded near the heating systems on deck 4, and it caused a chain explosion
along the central pipelines to the dormitories .”
I take a moment to take everything in. This can’t happen now. Were so close. So close.
“Send out security droids to sectors 3 through 5. Get troops down to sector 4, and …”
An alarm begins to sound overhead .
“Missiles incoming. Missiles incoming. Prepare for impact.”
“Sir, a pilot has taken one of our fighter ships and is firing at decks 3 and 4!”
A terrorist attack .
“Alright , get all fighter pilots to deck 2 and have them launch immediately! I want this
menace destroyed!”
I turn to leave the control room, when another shock wave seizes the ship . A moment
passes . Suddenly there’s a loud blast , and flames burst through the door towards me .
Every thing goes black .
I wake to find myself burning all over . My body feels like it’s on fire. I try to sit up, but
something 's pressing against my waist . I lift my neck to see a massive iron pipe resting on
my stomach . Flames burn all around me , and thick clouds of smoke pass by overhead . I try
to lift the pipe , but its far too heavy . And I feel tired … so tired. Something trickles down my
leg. I touch the liquid with my hand . Its warm and sticky . I bring my fingertips to my face , to
reveal dark crimson blood smeared over them. I try to lift the pipe again . But I’m tired . So
tired ….
“Captain Kantana”
My eyes snap open . A face peers down at me . It’s the face of a man . His dark locks of hair
droop out of his hood , and his eerie blue eyes pierce through mine .
“The great Captain Kantana!” He says in a slithery , cold voice , “Oh how I’ve waited for this
moment! How I’ve waited to finally watch you as you draw your last breaths!”
My head spins . My vision blurs . I can’ t breathe .
“Wha … What do you mean … . ” I begin to ask , but then it dawns on me , “It was you, you set
off the bomb didn’t you?”
“Oh yes , yes! And now it’s too late. All those poor innocent people . They relied on you. They
believed you could protect them. And now their dead … . ” He begins to smile , as I gasp for
breathe .
“W…Why?” I rasp , blood beginning to froth amongst my saliva .
“I’ve been on this ship all my life! I’ve lived amongst this metal for decades! It sickens me! I
ache from the years of those who have died, waiting to arrive! And in the end I shall just be
another person to arrive . Another person to have lived on this hulk of scrap metal . But no
longer . I shan ’t be just another among the sea of faces . Oh no. I shall be remembered .
Remembered as the one who des troyed the ship . I shall be immortal through this act!”
My leg stings and blood trickles down once more , faster this time . The flow doesn ’t stop . I
reach to touch my leg, when I brush against something at my hip. My gun! I pull it free from
its strap .
“Look around you! No ones here . Every one is with their families or friends . Everyone is trying
to stop the fires , mend the ship, and make it to planet side. No one will even know you
caused this. You ’ll just be another dea terrorist filed away in the archives .”
“No …. NO!” he screams menacingly , his eyes bulging , spit dripping down onto my cheek .
He crouches down and grabs at my neck , beginning to strangle me . I lift my gun, and fire. A
bright blue light fills the room. The man stares at me , a surprised look on his face. Then he
slumps to the ground beside me , dead , a pool of blood appearing around his body .
My vision begins to blur once again . My head spins . At least you stopped him. I tell myself .
At least you saved them. Slowly darkness engulfs me .
Lights passing by over head . A sensation of flying . Two figures engulfed in light look down at
me . Everything is blurred . Everything is bright . All is silent .
My vision comes into focus and noise begins to register within my brain . I look up. Two
medical personnel look down at me as they wheel me into the medical bay .
“Put his mask back on, he’s coming back into conciseness ” One says .
As a black mask slips over my face , my eyes begin to close . Darkness once again .
I wake to find myself sitting up against a slanted bed , facing a window . Outside the window ,
a giant planet lies amidst the darkness of space .
“You’re awake ” a voice sounds beside me .
I turn to see the lieutenant facing me, smiling .
“How do you feel?” he asks me .
“Tired … What ’s my status?” I ask quizzically .
“We … They … I’m sorry commander , there’ s nothing the medical staff can do. You’ve lost far
too much blood . You ’re internally bleeding , and all of the medical equipment which can fix
that kind of damage ha been damaged or destroyed . “There ’s a moments silence . “I’m
sorry” he adds .
I sit for a moment in silence .
“What’s that planet in front of us?” I ask after a while .
“It’s the planet sir. It’s Atma . We’ve arrived . We will be landing within the next hour sir.”
We are here … I smile . I did it. I got us here . My vision begins to blur , and exhaustion begins
to take a hold of me . But it feels different . I’m dieing .
“Sir… Sir! Please sir just try to hang in there!”
I want to, but I can’t. I’m so tired.
The lieutenant stares at me for a moment .
“What would you like the colony to be called sir?”
I think for a moment .
“Name it after my mother .”
“Very well sir, we shall name the colony Genera .”
He bows , and begins to walk out of the room.
“Lieutenant!” I call after him. “One last thing …”
“Yes sir?”
“A man tried to kill me today . He was insane . But he made me think about something . I want
to be remembered … Leave me your recorder .”
Captain Kantana of the IOS- 1: Year 7804 – Arrival at Atma
(Note all names can be changed as required , I’m not entirely up to date with infinity names
and such)

哇,完全看不了啊,lz修正一下嘛。

;em18; 日本人?

那个PDF文件的字体有问题
不能复制
只有人工校对

校对完毕

;em24; ;em24; 顺便翻译下巴。。

很好…很强大…

晕…不能加分…

I wake to find myself burning all over . My body feels like it’s on fire. I try to sit up, but
something 's pressing against my waist . I lift my neck to see a massive iron pipe resting on
my stomach . Flames burn all around me , and thick clouds of smoke pass by overhead . I try
to lift the pipe , but its far too heavy . And I feel tired … so tired. Something trickles down my
leg. I touch the liquid with my hand . Its warm and sticky . I bring my fingertips to my face , to
reveal dark crimson blood smeared over them. I try to lift the pipe again . But I’m tired . So
tired ….
我被燃烧声弄醒.感觉身体好像在火上.我试着坐起来,但是什么东西将我的腰压住了.我抬起头见到一个巨大的铁管压着我的胃.火焰在我的周围燃烧,和滚滚的浓烟.我试举起铁管,但是它太重了.而且我觉得很累…真的很累.什么东西沿着我的腿流下来.我用手碰了一下.它的温暖和黏黏的.我将手放到脸上,来抹掉脸上的血迹.然后再次尝试着将铁管举起来.但是我很累.太累了…
我自己尝试着翻译的…突然感觉我的英语真的很烂…不是一般的烂…你们就当没看见吧…;em06;

很好 很好

翻译得太好了!甚至比原文还要有文采!而且这个故事很吸引人!
;em04; 我要加分;em24;

楼主继续!给你评分了。;A058;

哦…连船长的名字一起翻译了呢…加分加分…不加对不起党对不起人民啊…

翻译非常精彩,而且也是去年的事情了,但是我最后提一句:

船长的名字,Kanata,是有寓意的。
这是个日文名字,汉字写法是“彼方”。
他以生命为代价,终于飞到了航程的终点,“彼方”。

次方的的翻译,认真起来是相当好的。